Student Progress Timeline

Maria López

Biology IA · Effect of temperature on enzyme activity

Draft 1 → Draft 3Overall progress: 9 / 24 → 16 / 24+7 marks overall

Draft 1

Sep 02

9 / 24

Research question and analysis were underdeveloped. Limitations not addressed.

Personal Engagement

1/2

Exploration

2/6

Analysis

2/6

Evaluation

2/6

Communication

2/4

Draft 2

Sep 18

12 / 24

Exploration improved after variables were clarified. Analysis still needs work.

Personal Engagement

1/2

Exploration

3/6

Analysis

3/6

Evaluation

3/6

Communication

2/4

Draft 3

Oct 04

16 / 24

Analysis now includes processed data and clearer graph interpretation.

Personal Engagement

2/2

Exploration

4/6

Analysis

4/6

Evaluation

3/6

Communication

3/4

Criterion progress

Criterion	Draft 1	Draft 2	Draft 3	Change
Personal Engagement	1 / 2	1 / 2	2 / 2	+1
Exploration	2 / 6	3 / 6	4 / 6	+2
Analysis	2 / 6	3 / 6	4 / 6	+2
Evaluation	2 / 6	3 / 6	3 / 6	+1
Communication	2 / 4	2 / 4	3 / 4	+1

Personal Engagement

1 → 2 / 2+1

Exploration

2 → 4 / 6+2

Analysis

2 → 4 / 6+2

Evaluation

2 → 3 / 6+1

Communication

2 → 3 / 4+1

Biggest improvement

Exploration

Still needs attention

Evaluation

3 / 6 in latest draft

Suggested next step

Ask the student to connect limitations to reliability and validity in Evaluation.